Friday, May 3, 2013
C4K Summary for April
Alex is from Mrs. Geldes fourth grade class in Nebraska. Alex’s post was titled “Snowy Day”. Alex woke up one morning to the smell of bacon. He hadn’t had bacon for a year. After breakfast Alex saw that it was snowing and decide to get dressed to go outside. His feet were freezing cold and stuck to the ground making him fall down.
My response to Alex
My name is Marie Allgood. I am an EDM 310 student at the University of South Alabama. I am studying to be a teacher. I loved your story. It was very interesting. I was excited to see what was going to happen at the end. I live in the south and we do not usually have snow. I would love to play in the snow one day. I think my favorite part was the bacon! I think I will have to cook bacon in the morning.
Liam is from Leopold Primary School in Victoria, Australia. He wrote about coming back from the two week break they had for Easter. Liam always tries to make his writing sound interesting. He tells about an Easter egg hunt in Leopold that included many fun activities. He saw many of his friends there and they decided to team up so that they could get more eggs. Liam ended up spending the night his friend’s house for a sleepover. The boys enjoyed playing on ipads, game stations, and watching movies. He played outside with his brother the next day after returning home.
My response to Liam
My name is Marie Allgood. I am an EDM 310 student at the University of South Alabama. I am studying to be an elementary teacher. I am very proud that you take the extra time to make your writing interesting. I read through your blog and you are doing a great job. Easter is one of my favorite holidays. I enjoy hunting eggs with my children. Sleepovers are a lot of fun. I love playing games on my ipad. It sounds like you had a great holiday vacation. I hope to read about many more of your adventures.